Teaching the writing process takes much time and patience. However, the students persevered and did an excellent job!
First of all, take a look at our awesome Award-Winning Writers' Notebooks that we will get to keep adding on to throughout the year.
There is a method to my madness here. We are learning to write an EXCELLENT paragraph using our Green, Yellow, Red, and Green. Please look carefully at each color's explanation below.
We will always use an outline that looks like this:
This is an INFORMATIONAL essay, so our green Topic Sentence gives a big idea or a big fact about our topic (no opinions, and no details should be in the Topic Sentence).
The yellow Star Ideas give FACTS about our topic. The yellow Star Ideas always begin with TRANSITION words.
We LOVE our "cheat sheets" that are included in our Writers' Notebook. This is a list of our time-order words/temporal words that we can use as our transitions.
Next, we give 2-3 Red Examples about each of our yellow Star Ideas.
Then, we move on to our rough draft paper that looks like this. This is when we use our outline and make everything into COMPLETE SENTENCES:
We do self-editing as well as peer-editing, and go crazy with our red pens:)
We even have a cheat sheet for our green conclusion sentences. This is green because we go back to our green Topic Sentence, and restate the topic sentence in different words.
Finally, we carefully use all of the corrections from our editing process, and we write our FINAL COPY. They must indent, skip lines, and only use the front of the loose leaf paper.
The final copy will be graded using the following rubric (or something similar):
Informational Text Rubric (Step Up to
Writing)
Name___________________Date___________Score___________
______(3/3) I
wrote my name, number, and date.
______(3/3) I
remembered to indent the paragraph.
______(5/5) I skipped lines.
______(10/10) My topic sentence
gives a big, overall idea of the topic. It does not give
away
the details of the topic.
______(6/6) I have 3 Star
Ideas.
______(6/6) The Star Ideas
begin with transition words.
______(6/6) The Star Ideas
give facts about the topic sentence.
______(6/6) I have 2-3 Red
Examples for each Star Idea.
______(5/5) My Red Examples
give specific examples for each Star Idea.
______(5/5) My conclusion
begins with “Conclusion Sentence Words.”
______(5/5) My conclusion
restates the topic sentence in other words.
______(10/10) I used my
editing marks to write the final draft correctly.
______(10/10) I used
punctuation marks correctly.
______(10/10) I spelled 3rd
grade words correctly, or copied the provided spelling
of
words.
______(10/10) I used correct
grammar.
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